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Life


What is life?
I don’t know.
Life is just…life.
It starts, and it ends.
But what is it like?
It’s not like time. Time cannot be stopped. Life can.
Yet, it’s like a river. Rivers can be controlled. Life can be controlled.
So is life like a river? Nah.
It’s not like a river, and it’s not like time…
What is life? What is it like?
Well, I’d say…
Life is whatever you want it to be. Good or bad.
No one else can make you change how your life is except you.
The question now is…
What DO you want it to be?
It’s your choice. Make it a good one.
...Yes, it's a poem. At least I think it is. If it is, it's Free Verse, then. Walt Whitman IS my favorite poet.

...Don't expect me to do this on a regular bases. I only do this when things in my life get screwed up.
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renesmeecullenlov Featured By Owner Jun 22, 2010
sooo true
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pictureUNperfect Featured By Owner Jan 19, 2009   Photographer
I like that its sooo true!
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Violentviolets Featured By Owner May 12, 2008   Writer
I like walt whitman too-




Do I contradict myself?
Very well then I contradict myself.
(I am large, I contain multitudes)

-Walt Whitman.
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GalaxyDancer Featured By Owner Nov 20, 2007
What is life?
I don't know.
But lo! I do know!
Life is whatever you want it to be. Good or bad.


Yes, I had to find some way to make a joke... But really, it's beautiful. And right now, life, confusing though it might be, is beautiful as well.
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Kumbirai Featured By Owner Oct 14, 2007
dude you suck in a very normal way.. you are telling me stuff i know.. but then again this is not intended for me and is is not to be informative towards me .. so basically i'm a weirdo !! lol .. love the poem ..:D
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artfreak1010 Featured By Owner Feb 11, 2010  Student Traditional Artist
Um i'm confused first you say I suck then you say you love the poem. Oh well I get confused a lot so... Ok whatever
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artfreak1010 Featured By Owner Feb 11, 2010  Student Traditional Artist
srry forget i said that
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banditkills Featured By Owner Mar 23, 2007
Intersting verse.
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Mistica-the-lynx Featured By Owner Dec 5, 2006   Digital Artist
wow its awosme!!
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Sonicmark Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2006  Student Filmographer
so true, and beautifully written
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